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Monday, 2 December 2013
Rough Cut & Feedback
What Went Well
- Costumes look effective
- Framing of shots is very good
- Kill shots work really well
- Transitions are good
- Effective locations
- Titles work well
What Can Be Improved
- The POV shot is very shaky and out of place. It should be refilmed and moved or removed.
- There are a lot of walking shots. They only need to give the impression of travelling. Cut some shots and reduce length of others.
- Reduce the number of titles.
- Edit the scenes to make them appear darker.
- Add dialogue (film scene)
- Add music
Suggestions:
-Eerie/Tense
-Rock
-Increasing Tempo
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Construction
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