Monday, 2 December 2013

Rough Cut & Feedback




What Went Well
 - Costumes look effective
 - Framing of shots is very good
 - Kill shots work really well
 - Transitions are good
 - Effective locations
 - Titles work well

What Can Be Improved
 - The POV shot is very shaky and out of place. It should be refilmed and moved or removed.
 - There are a lot of walking shots. They only need to give the impression of travelling. Cut some shots and reduce length of others.
 - Reduce the number of titles.
 - Edit the scenes to make them appear darker.
 - Add dialogue (film scene)
 - Add music
           Suggestions:
                           -Eerie/Tense
                           -Rock
                           -Increasing Tempo

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