Revised Scripts
Final Scene - Gangster & Boss
Ext. Rundown Garage Lot
Gangster enters left and walks at a brisk pace around a corner.
CUT TO: Mid Shot, Boss leaning against garage on phone.
Boss looks up from phone and stands up straight. Walks towards camera.
CUT TO: Two Shot, Boss enters from left, Gangster enters from right. Look at eachother.
Boss: Were you followed?
CAMERA CUTS BETWEEN BOSS AND GANGSTER DURING CONVERSATION
Gangster: No, of course not.
Boss: Good. I trust that you were successful.
Gangster: Of course I was.
Boss: Excellent, I knew that I could trust you.(1) Now, I have something else that needs doing.
Gangster: Sure, what is it?
Boss: You don't need to worry about that just yet. I'll be in touch.
CUT TO: Two Shot, Boss & Gangster facing eachother.
Boss exits left, Gangster walks away from camera and around corner.
Opening Scene - Gangster on Phone
Black Screen
Telephone Rings
Fades from Black
Ext. Shipping Container, Industrial Area
Gangster stood in centre of shot, back to camera. Takes mobile phone out of pocket and answers.
Gangster: Hello.(2) You got that job for me yet?(2) What's the pay like?(2) Yeah, alright. I'll get it done.
Gangster hangs up phone and exits right.
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